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Description
Quick painting for the night, little under 2 hours, done in Photosnap CS with a Wacam Cintek.
Hope you like!
Don't forget to checkout the time-lapse video!
The anatomy is on point, and the colors all work well together to create a visually pleasing piece. The values and saturation of the colors around the girl work well to create circular dynamic eye movement ( all around the girl ). But..I can see that you likely intended to make the blues around the girl's right hand stand out visually. For me though, I felt the background in that area simply had too bright of a value for those blues to stand out ( so, if you had added some shade / made the value of the background darker, those blues would have truly stood out ). Also, the top of the piece feels..cramped. I felt some more visual space ( like, literally extending the canvas a bit upward ) would have helped to provide the eye some a more natural movement following the circular line created by those blues ( Hope this at least made some sense ).
..Yes. I understand I am likely a "mere student" in your eyes. That I am "inexperienced," and it's "not my place" to even think of forming critiques about your art, or that perhaps I "need to be on your level." But. Even though I am just in the beginning stages of taking art seriously and learning about how to get into it professionally and I certainly am nowhere near able to render scenes like you, I am developing an artistic eye ( if you will ). An eye for seeing places where other artists might improve, and ultimately help them to reach their true, full potential. In my mind, you're a master. But there is always something to learn.
I wish you the best in these current tough times we are living in.